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> > > My whole life I have been seeing my dad work as a fireman and he inspires me > > > a lot .One day when I riding with my motorbike and I saw my dad ,he was uniformed and the car was pull over.He was trying to pick up a dog who had been ran over ,but he was alone,then I pull over my motorbike and put on rubber gloves and I help him to pick up and take the injured dog to the veterinary.That happens in so short of time but that meant a lot to me.I already like you I think you are beautiful.If you have a cellphone with camera then we could talk through it.We can talk in Portuguese or talk just a little in English if you want or whenever you want.