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- My name is David, i have 15 years life in Bogota Colombia and me like learn do speak english for the future
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- My name is David~~, i have~~ , I'm 15 years old , lifve in Bogota ,Colombia ,and mei would like to learn dhow to speak eEnglish , for ~~the~~ future ..... ¶¶this is the right way to write .. :)
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