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Texto de Tiziana1977 - English

  • The voice 2

  • My teacher said:"Let's sing with diaphragm, let's use the belly".First try of singing for distribuite the part of essay.
    • Panic.Afraid to fall and in the same time to have an about shyness.
    • Then the brilliant idea to sing in english , instead in italian.I blushed for the thought that my feel go out.
    • With english song nobody would understand.
    • In the afternoon , with my brother, went to her friend for to give the english text of "Yesterday"by Beatles.
  • It was my choice.
  • It was the perfect song .
    • With "Yesterday"I had my first important part in the essay.

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