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Text from distruct - English

  • The Battle

  • At the beginning, I thought it was a nightmare.
  • I was fighting him, my worst enemy, who had made me live hardly, we were facing up, in this deserted place, when he succeeded putting his knife on my chest.
  • I was scared, I couldn't move.
  • I said him he was a monster which doesn't deserve to live. He got fed up.
  • He then put his hand with his knife up, preparing to kill me.
  • At the same moment, I bent downward, he leaned too and then I gave him an uppercut.
  • He got knocked out.

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