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  • A dream

    • One of my dream (very simple I think) is to be fluent in English.
    • I began my learning at scholl when I was 10 years old and I was so happy o be able to understand what my idols sing.
    • Then, I learned a little of english culture and history , also about USA, South Africa And I understood at this moment the importance to speak other languages.
    • You can speak and understand people from all over the world even if they don't understand your language.
  • And I love English.
    • Behind English, there is so history, litterature (i love Jane Austen and Thomas Hardy), arts and music.
    • Too many things to discover and in the original version, it doesn't have the same effect.
    • I 'd like you help me to improve my english because I just want to speak this language like I speak French.
  • Thank you for reading.

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    • I began my learning at scholl when I was 10 years old and I was so happy o be able to understand what my idols sing.
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    • I began my learning English at scholol when I was 10 years old and I was sovery happy to be able to understand whatthe words my idols siang.
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    • Then, I learned a little of english culture and history , also about USA, South Africa And I understood at this moment the importance to speak other languages.
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    • Then, I learned a little of eabout English culture and history ,and also about USA,the USA and South Africa And I. I then understood at this moment the importancthe importance of being able to speak other languages.
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    • You can speak and understand people from all over the world even if they don't understand your language.
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    • YouOne can speak to and understand people from all over the world even if they don't understand your language.
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    • Behind English, there is so history, litterature (i love Jane Austen and Thomas Hardy), arts and music.
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    • BehindThe English, there is so history, language has a long history and many famous works of litterature (i love Jane Austen and Thomas Hardy), arts and music.
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    • Too many things to discover and in the original version, it doesn't have the same effect.
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    • Toohere are many things for me to discover andby reading them in their original version, it doesn'language of composition. The translated versions do not have the same effect as the real thing.
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    • I 'd like you help me to improve my english because I just want to speak this language like I speak French.
      투표하세요!
    • I 'd like you to help me to improve my eEnglish because I just want to speak thise language like I speak French.
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      투표하세요!
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