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Text from MR-GLOT - English

  • Importance of work

    • Everyone like spending time with family and friends without being stressed or concerned.
    • When we have much work and not time, we wish to have a break, a relaxing day or a mini holiday.
    • Well… that is Okey, certainly you will not enjoy enterely of that relax or comfortability without any obligation.
    • Well, now I tell you: You need to work!
    • Because without all those responsabilities and obligations that you hate, you will be exactly in the same way bored and wishing to do something else.
    • So, smile and enjoy of your work!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English