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Сообщение от thuynguyen_ktl9 - English

  • New job with English

  • Hi everyone.
  • Few months ago, I had an account in this website but I forgot it because I was so lazy to do something good like before.
  • Now I create a new account to make friend with you and to challenge my English after a long time not using.
  • I hope you can correct my mistakes and can be friends each other.
  • I am not good at English but I try to talk to someone.
  • My current job now is the first achievement because I study hard to get a little English in my brain.
  • I will tell you about the interview I had been through for job.
  • I came home after more than one year in Ha Noi with no dream, no target.
  • And then, I stayed at home for 5 months for nothing, just relax.
  • I applied for some positions in my hometown but it was impossible.
  • The last day I thought, that was the last chance for me to get job here.
  • I would try one more time.
  • I went there with my friend (she applied for job too), they talked to me by English.
  • Finally they chose me 'cause they thought I could do something.
  • Now I get the job but I don't know that it suits to me or not.
  • Hope everything works well

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English