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  • Some testing level text without importance

  • A lot of people dream of having some kind of super powers in real life.
  • Especially kids between 13 and 19 years old.
  • And if it's not the fact, that's at least my case.
  • Recently I was reading some articles in Wikipedia about Chakra, a kind of "basic human energy" believed to allow us an access to a different understading of life.
  • A lot of Yoga teachers share this theory with their students like what they will be able to accomplish their aims in life (get better marks, success with women, get an augmentation, etc..).
  • But let be realistic : the only "super powers" we, as mundane humans, can have are certainly not related to any point with projecting spider webs, get invisible or cast some sort of laser ray with our eyes.
  • The real super powers reside on developping our own physical and intellectual capacities in order to be able to surpass our congeners.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Recently I was reading some articles in Wikipedia about Chakra, a kind of "basic human energy" believed to allow us an access to a different understading of life.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
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    • A lot of Yoga teachers share this theory with their students like what they will be able to accomplish their aims in life (get better marks, success with women, get an augmentation, etc..).
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • But let be realistic : the only "super powers" we, as mundane humans, can have are certainly not related to any point with projecting spider webs, get invisible or cast some sort of laser ray with our eyes.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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    • The real super powers reside on developping our own physical and intellectual capacities in order to be able to surpass our congeners.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7