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Scriptum ab sant-spain - English

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    • I jumped out of the bed and ran up to the door, I opened it and the wind was so strong it nearly blew me over, so I closed it back and put my face against the glass of the window expecting the worst.
    • In the darkness, thanks to the constant lightning, I could see what was going on; the old Mac was looking for “Judd”, his adored cow which somehow had appeared in the middle of the field.
    • Struggling against the wind he ran towards it, when suddenly, a thunder falls on the cow lighting up the whole yard.
  • After this, the storm slowly died away, and through the clouds I could see the first ray of sunshine of a new day.
    • I found Mac crying on top of his now dead last hope for a better life; his illusions died as soon as that cow was gone, gone with the storm.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sententia 1
    • I jumped out of the bed and ran up to the door, I opened it and the wind was so strong it nearly blew me over, so I closed it back and put my face against the glass of the window expecting the worst.
      Elige nunc !
    • I jumped out of the bed and, ran up to the door, Iand opened it and t. The wind was so strong it nearly blew me over, so. Expecting the worst, I closed it back and put my face against the glass of the window expecting the worstwindow glass.
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  • Sententia 2
    • In the darkness, thanks to the constant lightning, I could see what was going on; the old Mac was looking for “Judd”, his adored cow which somehow had appeared in the middle of the field.
      Elige nunc !
    • In the darkness, thanksDue to the constant lightning, I could see what was going on; in the darkness. The old Mac was looking for “Judd”, his adored cow, which somehow had appeared in the middle of the field.
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  • Sententia 3
    • Struggling against the wind he ran towards it, when suddenly, a thunder falls on the cow lighting up the whole yard.
      Elige nunc !
    • Struggling against the wind heMac ran towards it, when suddenly, a thunder falls on the cowJudd. Suddenly lighting up the whole yard, lightning up the whole yard.struck the cow.
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    • I found Mac crying on top of his now dead last hope for a better life; his illusions died as soon as that cow was gone, gone with the storm.
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    • I found Mac crying on top of his now dead lastdead hope for a better life; h. His illusions died as soon as that cow was gone, gone with the storm. ¶
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