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Text from Joker1 - English

  • Environmental problems

  • Environmental problems: by government and big companies or individual?
  • It is generally agreed today that environmental problems is the one of the biggest issues that we have today.
  • Factories and government attempt to find a suitable solution for these problems by incentive of mankind that told them to do something with increase in pollution of air, water, and soil with some kind of industrial waste.
  • But many of us do not try to help in some way to do something with it.
  • In this situation, the main question can be: Who must solve the problems of contamination?
  • Let’s consider some general benefits and disadvantages of it.
  • In the first point I will tell you about roles of government and factories in this difficult occasion.
  • The first noticeable thing is that they have much more global and deep influence on such a troubled situation of pollution, greenhouse gases emission, chemical poisons that erupt by themselves.
  • So they can limit an average amount of poisons and any other emissions, they can do massive organizations that will be interested in destruction of litter, recycling materials of any kind, creation of biodegradable packing for food, clothes etc. That will be easier to support environment with help of such a large organizations.
  • In the second place we have an individual way to assist habitat of our existence.
  • What can we do by our own?
  • So it would be two acceptable variations of supporting and the first is: to limit the consumption of electricity and to collect garbage and take them to the recycling factories.
  • It is the first optimal variant to help the ecosystem you have around you by your own.
  • The second reasonable way is to have some connections with huge concern that tries to advocate the environment in any way they can.
  • I think that more rational decision is to cooperate together and set up the rules for using the resources for all kind of factories and human beings, and choose the committee that will be control the obeisance to these rules.
  • So Its up to you what to do with this sort of problems but the most reasonable think is to cooperate with each other and make all that we can do to protect the habitat of our subsistence.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Factories and government attempt to find a suitable solution for these problems by incentive of mankind that told them to do something with increase in pollution of air, water, and soil with some kind of industrial waste.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
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    • The first noticeable thing is that they have much more global and deep influence on such a troubled situation of pollution, greenhouse gases emission, chemical poisons that erupt by themselves.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • So they can limit an average amount of poisons and any other emissions, they can do massive organizations that will be interested in destruction of litter, recycling materials of any kind, creation of biodegradable packing for food, clothes etc. That will be easier to support environment with help of such a large organizations.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • So it would be two acceptable variations of supporting and the first is: to limit the consumption of electricity and to collect garbage and take them to the recycling factories.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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    • The second reasonable way is to have some connections with huge concern that tries to advocate the environment in any way they can.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
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    • I think that more rational decision is to cooperate together and set up the rules for using the resources for all kind of factories and human beings, and choose the committee that will be control the obeisance to these rules.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • So Its up to you what to do with this sort of problems but the most reasonable think is to cooperate with each other and make all that we can do to protect the habitat of our subsistence.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16