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    • Today i feel alone.i want to escape myself and go far from real life.i check facebook and see an interesting place,Da Lat. it takes me 4 hours to go .i will go there by coach. the price of each ticket is 130 000 vnd .it is not cheap for me because i am still a student but i decide to go Da Lat.
    • Althought i am not used to visit there, i want to grow up and have a memorable trip . someone said that Da Lat was very cold with many mountains,hills,valleys,specially pines and many kinds of fruit ( strawberry ,peach...) I hope next week i have a trip to Da Lat to enjoy the atmostphere in there

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  • משפט 1
    • Today i feel alone.i want to escape myself and go far from real life.i check facebook and see an interesting place,Da Lat. it takes me 4 hours to go .i will go there by coach. the price of each ticket is 130 000 vnd .it is not cheap for me because i am still a student but i decide to go Da Lat.
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    • Today i feel alone.iI want to escape myself and go far from real life.iI check facebook and see an interesting place,Da Lat . iIt takes me 4 hours to go .iI will go there by coach. the price of each ticket is 130 000 vnd .i. It is not cheap for me because i am still a student but i decide to go Da Lat.
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    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 1הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 1
  • משפט 2
    • Althought i am not used to visit there, i want to grow up and have a memorable trip . someone said that Da Lat was very cold with many mountains,hills,valleys,specially pines and many kinds of fruit ( strawberry ,peach...) I hope next week i have a trip to Da Lat to enjoy the atmostphere in there
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    • Althought i am not used to visit there, i want to grow up and have a memorable trip . sSomeone said that Da Lat was very cold with many mountains,hills,valleys,specially pines and many kinds of fruit ( strawberry ,peach...)¶I hope next week i have a trip to Da Lat to enjoy the atmostphere in there .
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    • הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 2הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 2