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Text from Adrea - English

  • To what extend do social network improve our lives ?

  • The first and most obvious one is that social networks help us keep connected.
  • We are always in touch with people from family or friends even if they went at the other side of the globe.
  • We can have casual conversation or have informative one.
  • Social network is also a way to keep in touch with the daily news and latest facts world wide as it’s for most people the first source of informations.
  • Plus, social networks are now categorize after their theme.
  • You can find a network for every subjects.
  • You can just chat and keep update about others on Facebook or Twitter, show pictures on Instagram, search for job on LinkedIn and so on.
  • This feature help save a lot of time because now you don’t have to search on many difference websites when you search something and you can directly go to the network specialize in this topic.
  • This specification of network has also give birth to lot of new ways to express yourself.
  • People can now show off their skills.
  • Writers have networks like Fray or Wattpad, artists have Deviantart and so on… These networks can even give to someone the chance to make their asset a source of income.
  • For example you can sell your art or find someone to publish your book thanks to special features on social networks.
  • As a conclusion, by the large number of different type of social network, everyone can find the most appropriate for him and what he search.
  • It helped gain a lot of time for research, socializing with more ease,demonstrating your skills and even find a job.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English