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    • LIon have abig jaws it can kill at one moment .this is difficult thing to seen by us mmmm .Yes i know espicaly when seeing the prey die in view of us .However it do this i dont blame it .If it isnot hungry ,it will not do that .Ijust balme mankind about which we do on ourselfes nowdays .We killed each others and cheat . we do things the animals,, which didnt have a braine,, will never do

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    • mankind¶Hi,¶am prisca by name, its my pleasure to contact you, i am very interested in learning your language, please care to write me on my private¶email address.(priscazamba1990@hotmail.com) so that i we can get to know our self well. and i have something important to share with you. ¶Looking forward to hearing from you.
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    • LIon have abig jaws it can kill at one moment .this is difficult thing to seen by us mmmm .Yes i know espicaly when seeing the prey die in view of us .However it do this i dont blame it .If it isnot hungry ,it will not do that .Ijust balme mankind about which we do on ourselfes nowdays .We killed each others and cheat . we do things the animals,, which didnt have a braine,, will never do
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    • LIions have abig jaws ithat can kill at oneany moment .thisand is a difficult thing to seen by for us mmmm .Yes iI know, especically when seeing the prey die in full view of us .However it do this i done happen, and I can't blame ithem .If it isno't hungry ,it will nothen it won't do thait .I just balame mankind about which, because we do onit ourselfves nowadays .We've killed each others and cheat ed. wWe do things theo animals,, which didnon't have athe braine,, and will never do
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