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- This Weekend
- I'm plannifing to comeback at Brest this weekend, town where I lived since Two Years.
- Because, this week I was at Cergy, my native town, to see my family, for holyday (vacation ?).

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- This Weekend
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- I'm plannifing to comeback at Brest this weekend, town where I lived since Two Years.
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- This weekand I'm planni~~fing to~~ng comeback ato Brest ~~this weekend, town wher~~, the place I lived ~~since T~~for two Yyears.
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- Because, this week I was at Cergy, my native town, to see my family, for holyday (vacation ?).
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- Because, I spent this week ~~I was at Cergy,~~at my native town~~, to see~~ Cergy, with my family, for holyiday (or vacation ?, both are OK).
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