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- Home home sweet home
- Home Home sweet home Last month ı went to holiday to Marmara island.Island is good but we are stayed hotel is terrible.And my holiday didn't fun.When we come back İstanbul,I have never be happy my life.

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- Home Home sweet home Last month ı went to holiday to Marmara island.Island is good but we are stayed hotel is terrible.And my holiday didn't fun.When we come back İstanbul,I have never be happy my life.
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- ~~Home~~ Home sweet home¶¶¶Last month ıI went ~~to holiday~~on vacation to Marmara iIsland.I The island is good but ~~we are stayed hotel is te~~the hotel we stayed at was horrible. And my holiday ~~did~~wasn't fun.~~When we come back İstanbul,~~ I have never been happyier in my life when we came back to Istanbul.
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- ~~Home~~ Home sweet home¶¶¶Last month ıI went ton holiday to Marmara island. The Island iwas good, but ~~we ar~~the hotel we stayed ~~hotel i~~in was terrible.And my holiday ~~did~~wasn't fun. When we coame back to İstanbul, I have never been happyier in my life.
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