添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Aksamaからのテキスト - English

  • Barbecue

  • I am a big gourmand.
    • Especially I like to eat meat.
  • Also I like to cook it.
  • Cooking of meat gives me pleasure.
  • Last time I grilled pork at the sea resort.
    • It was a success it was very tasty, though I grilled without assistance.
    • How I understood a main thing during cooking of barbecue is to concentrate on a process and not to look aside.
    • Early I like to drink beer with meat but now there is only low-quality beer in our country unfortunately.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English