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Сообщение от Alexandr614 - English

  • About education

  • It’s very interesting story.
  • The previous name of my university is “Moscow state university of mechanical engineering in chemical industry”.
    • The university educated mechanical design engineers for chemical industry.
  • But, in the end of the previous century the topic of environmental protection was very modern.
  • It was a difficult time for, science, education, and industry of the Russia.
  • The industry crushed after the fall of USSR.
  • And the heads of my university decided to rename my university like “Moscow State University of Environmental Engineering”.
  • As the result of that, my university got many finance.
  • University started to educate engineer-ecologists.
  • But nobody remake a system of education.
    • The heads of the university only rename subjects of the education.
  • But the system of the education didn’t change.
  • The new engineer-ecologists were starting to appear, but they were same mechanical design engineers.
    • But, they knew little more about equipment for a cleaning air, water and a utilization of garbage.
  • Also, they knew more about renewable energy sources.
    • That’s why I am working for more than three years as mechanical design engineer in other branches of industry.
  • I have a wide engineering outlook.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English