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Сообщение от Wejo - English

  • My interest in medicine

  • You know I have liked medicine ever since I was a kid.
    • Being 12-14 I took an interest in ophtalmology.
  • That's how I did.
  • When I came home from school there was a beginning of a soap opera.
    • In one part one of main characters was poisoned after that she lost an ability to see.
    • I was likely to be very impressionable because I really went for this field of medicine.
    • In 8 grade we began to study biology of a man and it was really interesting for me.
    • Also I was interested in onoclogy.
    • I was concerned by a question: why people die of cancer.
  • I read a bunch of articles about it.
    • In 9 grade it occured to me that I needed to study chemistry.
    • I went to the library and took a chemistry text book for Eighth form pupils and I read it from beginning to end.
  • I like medicine.
    • I know that students of medical university bury in books they don't have a free time to have a rest or meet with friends.
    • But that's right because they will be responsible for lives of their patients.
  • I hope I will cope with studying to become a doctor because I really like it.
  • Nothing can be compared with a word of thanks said by your patient.

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