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My first post
- Hello ,I am shorouq from Saudi Arabia ,My age is 23 years old and I live in Saudi Arabia I want improve my English langauge . Thanx .

shosh_asAugust 2015Voĉdoni nun!
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- My first post
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- Hello ,I am shorouq from Saudi Arabia ,My age is 23 years old and I live in Saudi Arabia I want improve my English langauge . Thanx .
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Hello ,I am sShorouq from Saudi Arabia ,~~My age is~~I am 23 years old ~~and I live in Saudi Arabia~~.¶I want to improve my English ~~langauge~~skills . Thanx ks.
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- Hello , I am sShorouq from Saudi Arabia ~~,My age is~~. I am 23 years old and I live in Saudi Arabia.¶I want improve my English langauage . Thanx ks.
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- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1