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- My name`s Luis.I live Rio de Janeiro, speak Spanish and portuguese, have fourteen years old.
- I'd like speak English because have friends but not speak they.
- (fue la primer cosa que escribí en inglés pero mi primer idioma es portugués) )

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- My name`s Luis.I live Rio de Janeiro, speak Spanish and portuguese, have fourteen years old.
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- My name`s Luis. I live in Rio de Janeiro, speak Spanish and portuguese, and have fourteen years old.
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- My name`s Luis. I live Rio de Janeiro, I speak Sspanish and portuguese~~, have~~ and I am fourteen years old.
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- My name` is Luis. I live Rio de Janeiro, I speak Spanish and pPortuguese, ~~have~~and I am fourteen years old.
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- I'd like speak English because have friends but not speak they.
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- I'd like to speak English because I have friends ~~but~~who speak it and I can not speak with theym.
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- (fue la primer cosa que escribí en inglés pero mi primer idioma es portugués) )
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- (fue la primer cosa que escribí en inglés pero mi primer idioma es portugués) )
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