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Сообщение от castellano - English

    • about me

    • hi, my name is carlos castellano, I lives in caracas-Venezuela.
    • I want speak and write english, because I need for my jobs, I am a medical student in the Universidad Central de Venezuela. i twenty year old.
    • I have two sister, one lives in San Francisco-California and the other lives here, she is a nurse.
    • my english is very basic and need leard more.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English