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• The young woman casted a glance at the world around of her and showed his sun glasses.

• If she wanted to arrive to her destination without any problem, it was better that she doesn’t drawn the attention of people.

• Even a novice will be quietly than her.

• But it was no her fault; she couldn’t relax her.

• She can’t seize to this afternoon which she have exceptionally gave to shopping.

• It was sad, but finally, these thick wall which did her to a icon, were became a sanctuary. Her sanctuary.

• The place where she feel free and safe.

• Where she feel protect and where she can play with people who understand her.

• When she pass theses wall, when they ask to take care of her, she panicked.

• She believed all the time that all of her acts were observed.

• It was without all of these people who looked hard at her when they don’t rush on her with a pen at the hand.

• She lowered the head, putted on her hat, and steer clear of a group of people united in front of a stand, shoving, in the same time, a young man.

• There is a long time that the gap was enough large and deep.

• He should dug a little yet.

• A little stroke of leg here, and a other, and now the breath blow a little more stronger in the branch.

• Now, the clouds becames thicker.

• Now, the sun wanted to hide himself.

• Remarkable as the Reaper knew to make speak people !

• A rictus appeared on the lips of young man who closed the newspaper and opened his bag.

• The bag that escaped him hands when he collide with a young woman.

• - Eh ! he cried when she doesn’t stop her.

• And then that Georges brew over against the rudeness of people and the injustice of life, against the decadence of respect of the artist and against his poor crazy dreams, that young woman moved away fastly, heart beating, Gaspard totally forget his bones.

• A treasure which value a thousand of bones.

• He feels him and yet, his heart beat fastly.

• All his body was shiver of excitation.

• But, a other feeling combined it to this excitation, and became more intense. The fear.

• He didn’t listen the curious whisper of the invisible angel who beds him to do stop.

• He doesn’t hear the scream of wedding which pick up, neither the first thunderclaps.

• Georges and the young woman stop themself and looked the sky.

• They looked the sea which stir and the breath which became stronger.

• And their hear were shivering in unison.

• She arrives, it whispered.

• And more Gaspard dug, more the sun hid himself.

• He didn’t extract his treasure.

• So he dug and dug… and then, more he dug, more he buried himself.

• All treasure, little Gaspard, are not good to extract.