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  • What do you think about at night?

    • What do you think about before sleeping?
    • It's my favourite time, when I haven't fallen asleep yet, laying in my bed, staring at the ceiling and creating new words in my head.
    • Look, there is a girl named Candice, who is David Ho's invention.
    • She is pretty and small, but you don't know the only important fact about her: Candice is dead.
    • She has had a silent lonely life and has got a silent lonely death.
  • She has a very interesting story, but to be honest, I am too lazy to copy David's words.
    • Well, she became a ghost sent in our world again to battle evil.
    • I am still staring at my ceiling, wondering what if I would be sent to our world again?
  • If I agree to save people, trying to get rid of different spiritual monsters?
    • I guess the answer is no. And which is your decision?

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