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Text from NgocPhamThiBich - English

    • The Story About A Blinded Girl

    • There is a blinded girl.
    • She always hates herself because her eyes can’t see anything, except black.
  • She hates everybody, except her lover.
  • He always stays with her.
  • She says to him that if she could see the light, the world, she would marry him.
    • In one day, there is a boy who would like to dedicate her eyes.
    • After the surgery, now, she can see everything, even her lover.
  • He asks her: “You can see all the world now.
    • Will you marry me?” She is very disappointed because her lover is also blind like her and she refused to marry him.
    • The boy feels wretched, before leaving, he leaves a massage to her: “Please save my eyes!”

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