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- Good day everybody!
- I try learn English , but some times I haven't enough time for it.
- And I hope that, this is my first article in this site will help me find new friends and also helps me to improve my English.
- I've started to study English somewhere 10 years ago, but there were big brakes in my education.
- And not always I could speak with people who are native speakers. PS welcome!
- Ready to speake and if you need can help you in Rusian ! Thanks! )

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- Good day everybody!
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- ~~Good day everybody!~~hello every body are you ok ? i hope so ¶are you happy ? i hope so
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- I try learn English , but some times I haven't enough time for it.
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- I'm trying to learn English , but some times I haven't enough time for it.
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- I try to learn English , but some times I don't have~~n't~~ enough time for ithis.
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- And I hope that, this is my first article in this site will help me find new friends and also helps me to improve my English.
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- ~~And I hope that,~~Since this is my first article ion this site I hope that it will help me to find new friends and also (helps me) to improve my English.
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- And I hope that, this article, that is my first ~~articl~~one ion this site, will help me to find new friends and will also helps me to improve my English.
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- I've started to study English somewhere 10 years ago, but there were big brakes in my education.
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- I've started to study English about/somewhere 10around 10/ten years ago, but there were big gaps/breakes during my education.
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- I~~'ve~~ started to study English ~~somewhere~~about 10 years ago, but there were ~~big brakes in my education~~long pauses in my studies.
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- And not always I could speak with people who are native speakers. PS welcome!
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- (And) not always I could speak with /talk to (people who are) native speakers. PS welcome!
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- And ~~not always I could speak with people who are~~also I haven't often had the possibility to speak with natives speakers. PS welcome!
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- Ready to speake and if you need can help you in Rusian ! Thanks! )
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