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Сообщение от kimdayeong - English

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  • 25.
    • This picture was taken at a Library.
    • What I notice first is some people using computers.
    • One man who has brown hair is wearing hoody jacket.
    • He is watching a computer monitor.
    • On the left side, One woman who has Carring a bag is walking through the corridor.
    • The other people are doing sth. and using computers.
    • On the top, there is Television.
    • In the back ground, I can see bookshelves.
  • The place looks like a typical Library.
  • and everything in this picture seems peaceful. 26.
    • This picture was taken at a Library.
    • What I notice is 2 people reading books.
    • One man who has long curry hair is wearing a black T-shirt.
    • He is looking through a book.
    • Behind him, One woman who is wearing Light yellow shirt is look through a book.
    • In the right side, Many books in the bookshelves.
    • In the background, I can see a big window.
    • The place looks like a typical Library.
    • and everything in this picture seems Calm and quiet. 27.
    • This picture was taken at the restaurant.
  • What I notice first is 3 people.
    • One man who is wearing white shirt is carrying a wine.
    • And he is also explaining wine to women.
    • Next to him, One woman who is wearing a necklace and sleeveless shirt is listening to him.
    • The other woman who has a ponytail is also listening.
    • In the foreground, cups and lights can be seen.
    • In the backward, there is a brick wall.
    • Also, I can see a green tree.
  • The place looks like a typical restaurant.
  • and everything in this picture seems well-organized.

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