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    • Motivation Letter For Universities Abroad

  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am studying International Management in my 3th semester at the University xxxxxx, Germany.
  • Herewith I would like to introduce myself as suitable candidate for the same subject with your university.
  • Within the last semesters I have been improving my economic, legal and linguistic skills.
  • My foreign language combination with English and Italian will help a lot at your university.
  • In consequence of my apprenticeships as so-called ‘Office Manager’ & ‘Master Craftsman of IT’ I gained a lot of practical experience in the past.
  • Now I would like to get intercultural exchange and improve my business Italian.
  • In order to be on the right track for prospective jobs your faculty offers great program modules with international orientation and business profile.
  • From those and from further subject offers I aspect to profit enormously during and after my semester with your university.
    • Especially, the courses ‘Economics and management of non-profit organizations’ & ‘Management of retailing companies’ correlate with my needs and preferences.
  • For those reasons, I am confident continuing my studies with great commitment at your university.
    • I am hoping that my previous academic development in combination with my practical or rather professional experience meet your expectations for an appropriate candidate Looking forward hearing from you

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    • In consequence of my apprenticeships as so-called ‘Office Manager’ & ‘Master Craftsman of IT’ I gained a lot of practical experience in the past.
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    • In order to be on the right track for prospective jobs your faculty offers great program modules with international orientation and business profile.
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    • Especially, the courses ‘Economics and management of non-profit organizations’ & ‘Management of retailing companies’ correlate with my needs and preferences.
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    • Especially, the courses ‘Economics and management of non-profit organizations’ & ‘Management of retailing companies’ correlate with my needs and preferences.
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    • I am hoping that my previous academic development in combination with my practical or rather professional experience meet your expectations for an appropriate candidate Looking forward hearing from you
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    • I am hoping that my previous academic development in combination with my practical or rather professional experience meet your expectations for an appropriate candidate¶L.¶I'm looking forward hearing from you.
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