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Poruka od Irka16 - English

    • My little story

    • This story about girl, which would be ideal.
  • You say:"It's good!" No.
    • Ideals do not be.
    • She find ideal, and lose his individualism.
    • So, she become standart and boring girl.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English