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Text from DashaKurnosowa - English

  • School

    • Have you ever wondered about how the school day begins?
    • In fact all pupils come already when school open.
  • And it's so interesting to see how it all begins...
    • (I will write the way I are).
  • The morning comes.
    • The school`s janitor opening school and goes home.
    • Gradually begin to come to the Technicals, custodians and other school employees.
    • Then there's the Director, followed by the head teacher, and tightened the other teachers.
    • At this time school still almost empty.
    • The silence is in the coridors and classrooms.
    • But here comes the first disciple, followed by second, third...
  • The school is gradually filled with noise, the sounds of children's voices, merry childish laughter .
  • And then is heard a terrible voice ushers and teachers.
    • The school seemed to be alive and turns into a huge giant stationary, which inside all the noise and shaking.
    • But after lessons when the evening comes, the giant calms down.
    • First pupils, then teachers, gradually leave school and going home.
  • All the rooms are empty and filled with immense silence: first first ringing, and then thick as milk pudding, which is occasionally broken only by the watchman, who came to do their night work.
    • The silence everywhere: in a classrooms, the gym, the dinning room.
  • It is mistress of all school evenings and nights.
  • She has no limits.
  • Nothing will break.
  • She gently enters the school in his embrace, and the school gradually falls asleep.
  • Until the morning.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English