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  • Short story: "The golden peak"

  • The man stepped on the ground and immediately felt the pain in the foot.
  • Jumped backwards, crouched and manually removed the drop of blood: observed the bird.
  • I had the yellow beak.
  • He flew immediately.
  • The feathers at the base of the peak were darker.
  • Head: blue-grey and light grey chest, with brown tones in the upper parts.
  • Intolerant of pain began to invade you.
  • He went up to the waist.
  • He called his son and told him: —A bird stung me foot, I have a sharp pain, I can't stand more...
  • — But, Dad, the beaks of birds does not hurt, nor can do damage, do not panic, not passes nothing —Hurts so much!
  • -He said to his son.
  • The unrest climbed to the groin and then the chest.
  • The man was up to the center of Mendoza, at the Spanish hospital.
  • He sat down to wait their turn.
  • Not attended it until the Sun fell.
  • There was more important to attend to emergencies.
  • The man laid down in the Chair.
  • Removed shoes and stockings, until he stopped breathing.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English