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    • Why does somebody goes to college?

    • Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
    • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
    • Have a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
    • Most of employees prefer more qualified workers.
    • A degree on a renowned institution can compensate, for example, the lack of experience.
    • Furthermore, during the study years a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
  • The friendships made in college can be extremely useful on the professional life.
    • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skill needed to reach some bigger objective.
    • A man who always dreamed about be a doctor and save lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
    • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
  • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
  • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
    • Have a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
    • Most of employees prefer more qualified workers.
    • A degree on a renowned institution can compensate, for example, the lack of experience.
    • Furthermore, during the study years a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
  • The friendships made in college can be extremely useful on the professional life.
  • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skill needed to reach some bigger objective.
    • A man who always dreamed about be a doctor and save lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
    • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.

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    • Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
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    • Attending a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
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    • Attending a college or a university seems like a good option for many people because, a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
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    • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
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    • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instreducation.
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    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
      투표하세요!
    • A small business owner who went to the business school haves more chances to understand and interpret the signals of the market than someone who just decides to open a cafeteria and does not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
    • A small business owner who went to the business school have mores a better chance tof understanding and interpreting signals of the market than someone who just decide to open a cafeteria and do not understand too muchbusiness an not knowing about management, logistitcs or micro and micro economics.
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    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro andcollege or university and studied a business course is more likely to have more knowledge in the business field. As the person could understand the concept of business planning and understand more about how to manage the business, transport and logistics and/or micro economics.
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    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
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    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free ion the internet, c. Colleges and uUniversities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
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    • Although, in these days, w and age, people can find free information aboutof almost everything for free invia the iInternet, websites and some colleges and universities continue offering anthat offer outstanding quality of education.
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    • Have a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
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    • Haveing a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their his fields when seeking for a job.
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    • Haveing a degree can also help a professional get better positions in their fields when seeking for a job.
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    • Furthermore, during the study years a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
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    • Furthermore, during the study yearsyears of study, a person can also build their own network with other students and professors.
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    • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skill needed to reach some bigger objective.
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    • Above all, at least in my opinion, is use the diploma as a skillis needed to reach some bigger objective.
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    • A man who always dreamed about be a doctor and save lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
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    • A man who always dreamed about being a doctor and saveing lives can only accomplish his wishes by attending a college.
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    • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
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    • A girl who wish be an environmental lawyer can- to be could only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
    • A girl who wishants to be an environmental lawyer can only fight for the planet if she had a lawyer degree.
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    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.Attend a college or a university seems a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
      투표하세요!
    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the pricecost of tuitions and fees are always raising, m. Many people keep followtaking this path.A of attending a college or a university. it seems like a good option for many people because a degree can open many doors in someone's life.
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    • A well-educated person is more likely to make good decisions about their own life rather than someone with less instruction.
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    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance to understand and interpret signals of the market than someone who just decide open a cafeteria and do not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
      투표하세요!
    • A small business owner who went to the business school have more chance towill understand and interpret signals of the market better than someone who just decide to open a cafeteria and does not understand too much about management, logistics or micro and micro economics.
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    • Although, in these days, we can find information about almost everything for free in the internet, colleges and universities continue offering an outstanding quality of education.
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    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, despite the price of tuitions and fees are always raising, many people keep following this path.
      투표하세요!
    • Those are just a few reasons why a young student should attend a college, d.Despite the priceraising of the tuitions and fees are always raising fees, many people keep following this path.
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