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My family
- My family is composed for five persons, my mother, my father, my two sisters and me.
- I am the firstborn of my family (im 14 years old).
- My parents are divorced and i live with my mom and my sisters.

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- My family is composed for five persons, my mother, my father, my two sisters and me.
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- My family ~~is composed for five person~~has five members, my mother, my father, my two sisters and me.
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- My family ~~is composed for five person~~consists of five members, my mother, my father, my two sisters and me.
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句子 2
- I am the firstborn of my family (im 14 years old).
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- I am the firstborn of my family (iI'm 14 years old).
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句子 3
- My parents are divorced and i live with my mom and my sisters.
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- My parents are divorced and iI live with my mom and my sisters.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3