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feel pity
Just I went for a walk and saw a homeless man.
- I was very sorry.
He lay without food.
He was a grown man with a beard and white hair.
- I asked if I needed anything and said: —I need food. I'm hungry.
- Immediately I took from my pocket money and bought a piece of bread and devoured instantly.
- I hope he has done a fine because I was sad.

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- Just I went for a walk and saw a homeless man.
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- I was very sorry.
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- I ~~was~~felt very sorry for him.
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- He lay without food.
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- He was a grown man with a beard and white hair.
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- I asked if I needed anything and said: —I need food. I'm hungry.
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- I asked if Ihe needed anything and he said~~:¶—~~ "I need food., I'm hungry."
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- Immediately I took from my pocket money and bought a piece of bread and devoured instantly.
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- Immediately I took money from my pocket ~~money~~ and bought him a piece of bread ~~and~~which he devoured instantly.
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- I hope he has done a fine because I was sad.
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- I hope he hais do~~ne a~~ing fine because I ~~was sad~~felt sorry for him. ¶
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