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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scold me, my mommy never scold me but she my sister always scold me.
    • My daddy never scold me is more, he has a good relation with hers daughters.
    • Today, my girlfriend came at my home, she and my sister doesn't has a good relation, my mommy and Xiomy has a good relation.
    • I really like be at home with Xiomy, I like see movies, chat, play, to do slumber party......
    • Right now, we are on christmas holidays, then, today we go amusement park.
    • Later, I don't have any plan, because, I'll improvise, all for we don't come back home while my sister is at home.

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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scold me, my mommy never scold me but she my sister always scold me.
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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me but she my sister always scolds me.
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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me but she my sister always scolds me.
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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scolds me, m. My mommy never scolds me, but she my sister always scolds me.
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    • MyI lifve isa very happy live but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me but she and my sister always scold me.
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    • My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me but she my sister always scold medoes.
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    • MyI life is verybe happy life, but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me but she, my sister always scolds me.
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    • My life is very happy, but sometimes my sister scolds me, my mommy never scolds me, but she my sister always scolds me.
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    • Today, my girlfriend came at my home, she and my sister doesn't has a good relation, my mommy and Xiomy has a good relation.
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    • Today, my girlfriend came ato my home, she and my sister doesn' not hasve a good relationship, my mommy and Xiomy hasve a good relationship.
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    • Today, my girlfriend came ato my home, s. She and my sister doesn' not hasve a good relation, mship. My mommy and Xiomy hasve a good relationship.
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    • Today, my girlfriend came ato my home, she and my sister doesn't hasve a good relation, mship. My mommy and Xiomy hasve a good relationship.
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    • I really like be at home with Xiomy, I like see movies, chat, play, to do slumber party......
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    • I really like be at home with Xiomy, I like to see movies, chat, play, toand do slumber party......
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    • I really like be at home with Xiomy,. I like to see movies, chat, play, to doand have slumber partyies......
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    • I really like being at home with Xiomy, I like seewatching movies, chatting, play, to do slumber party.....ing, and having overnight parties.
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    • I really like being at home with Xiomy,. I like seeto watch movies, chat, play, to doand to have slumber party.....ies.
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    • I really like to be at home with Xiomy, I like to see movies, chat, play, to doand to throw slumber party......
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    • Later, I don't have any plan, because, I'll improvise, all for we don't come back home while my sister is at home.
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    • Later, ifI don't have any plan, becauses, I'll improvise, all for because we we dwon't come back home while my sister is at homthere. ¶
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    • Later, I don't have any plans, because, I'll improvise, all for we d. We won't come back home while my sister is at homthere. ¶
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    • LaAfter,wards I don't have any plan, becauses, I'll just improvise, all forso that we don't come back home while my sister is at home. ¶
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    • Later, I don't have any plans, because,so I'll improvise, all forso we don't come back home while my sister is at homthere.
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    • Later, I don't have any plan, because, I'll have to improvise, all for we don'; we will not come back home while my sister is at home. ¶
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