添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

FunnixOnからのテキスト - English

    • a key maybe ?

    • Thinking about it by myself,i released that the key for happiness is stop waiting something from someone,i mean that we don't have to put our hope on someone,what if he disappointed you ?

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English