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- I work with TI and wanna learn english and practice with talk because i wish go to another country for study and upgrade in technology

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- I work with TI and wanna learn english and practice with talk because i wish go to another country for study and upgrade in technology
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- I work with TI and wannat to learn eEnglish and practicse ~~with~~ talking because iI wish go to another country for ~~study and upgrade~~my studies in technology.
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