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    • 5 days europe trip

    • hi Lore! How are you?
    • I was wondering if you want to come with me for a five day europe trip.
    • The first day i am planning to visit Paris because is quite near Italy, it would be fantastic to visit the Tour Eiffel and the Louvre museum because i love art, the night i will stay in an hotel near the Senna, there would be a fantastic view.
    • The second day i will stay in Paris and i'll go to Disneyland Paris. the third day i will travel to Valencia, in Spain, by train.
    • There i would like to visit the "Centre del carme" a museum of beautiful arts of Valencia.
    • I will also visit la "cattedrale di santa maria" because is a beautiful monument.
    • The fourth day i will travel to london by the eurostar, a train that travel under the English Channel, in London i would like to visit the British Museum and Buckingam Palace.
    • The fifth day i will have to come back to italy but i will stop in Amsterdam where i can see the house of Anne Frank, in the evening i will return to Italy. what do you think about it? would you like to come with me? answer me back soon

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    • The first day i am planning to visit Paris because is quite near Italy, it would be fantastic to visit the Tour Eiffel and the Louvre museum because i love art, the night i will stay in an hotel near the Senna, there would be a fantastic view.
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    • The first day iI am planning to visit Paris because is quitet's near Italy, it would be fantastic to visit the Tour Eiffel and the Louvre museum, because iI love art,. During the night iI will stay in an hotel near the Senna, there would be a fantastic view.
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    • The second day i will stay in Paris and i'll go to Disneyland Paris. the third day i will travel to Valencia, in Spain, by train.
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    • The second day iI will stay in Paris and iI'll go to Disneyland Paris. the third day iI will travel to Valencia, in Spain, by train.
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    • The fourth day i will travel to london by the eurostar, a train that travel under the English Channel, in London i would like to visit the British Museum and Buckingam Palace.
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    • The fourth day iI will travel to lLondon by the eEurostar, a train that travels under the English Channel, i. In London iI would like to visit the British Museum and Buckingham Palace.
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    • The fifth day i will have to come back to italy but i will stop in Amsterdam where i can see the house of Anne Frank, in the evening i will return to Italy. what do you think about it? would you like to come with me? answer me back soon
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    • The fifth day iI will have to come back to iItaly but iI will stop in Amsterdam where iI can see the house of Anne Frank, in the evening iI will return to Italy. wWhat do you think about it? wWould you like to come with me? aAnswer me back soon.
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