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Text from dyahjasmine1 - English

  • Being Freshman

    • I'm so happy that I've time to write again after almost one month I didn't write a blog.
    • Lately I feel so tired because yesterday my study has beginning.
    • Go to bed earlier, wake up soo early in the morning, grab some bread, wear tie and suit absolutely that's not my habit because after back from Germany I got almost 4 months free time!
    • That I've used to study general lessons for a month and I got 2 months to prepared my test in universities.
    • The Good news is I got my admission from University and I study German literature!
    • Yay! well I'm so excited about this announcement that I got at 23:00 o'clock.
    • I don't know why I'm so in love with this language, I mean not just the language but also the country!
    • I've planned to take a English and Japanese course (I hope I've much time), well it's because my English is pretty bad it's not good enough and I'm suck at Japanese, actually I started to learn Japanese by myself on June and memorized the important alphabets "Hiragana"!
    • I really think that you (Japanese learner) should learn it because otherwise Japanese isn't going to be easy! but I'm not good to timing my time, that's why I've to close my Japanese book and start looking for japanese course because I've so much questions and I don't have any friend from Japan, well I've one but she's so busy and I won't to bother her and take a intensive course is better way for me.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Go to bed earlier, wake up soo early in the morning, grab some bread, wear tie and suit absolutely that's not my habit because after back from Germany I got almost 4 months free time!
      Vote now!
    • GI go to bed earliery, wake up sooreally early in the morning, grab some bread, wear tie and suit absolutely thaput on a suit and tie. It's not my habit, because after I got back from Germany I got almost 4 months of free time!
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    • That I've used to study general lessons for a month and I got 2 months to prepared my test in universities.
      Vote now!
    • That I've used my free time to study general lessons for a month and I gothen spent 2 months to prepareding my tests in universities.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
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    • I've planned to take a English and Japanese course (I hope I've much time), well it's because my English is pretty bad it's not good enough and I'm suck at Japanese, actually I started to learn Japanese by myself on June and memorized the important alphabets "Hiragana"!
      Vote now!
    • I've planned to take an English and Japanese course (I hope I've much time), well i have a lot of time for this). It's because my English is pretty bad, it's not good enough a. And I'm suck at Japanese,. I actually I started to learn Japanese by myself oin June and memorized the important alphabets "Hiragana"!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8
  • Vakya 9
    • I really think that you (Japanese learner) should learn it because otherwise Japanese isn't going to be easy! but I'm not good to timing my time, that's why I've to close my Japanese book and start looking for japanese course because I've so much questions and I don't have any friend from Japan, well I've one but she's so busy and I won't to bother her and take a intensive course is better way for me.
      Vote now!
    • I really think that you (Japanese learner) should learn it because otherwise Japanese isn't going to be easy! but I'm not good to timat planning my time, that's why I' have to closestop using my Japanese book and start looking for ja Japanese course, because I' have so muchany questions and I don't have any friends from Japan, well I'. Well , I have one but she's so busy and I wdon't want to bother her and takeing an intensive course is better way for me anyway.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9