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    • Hi, my name is Ale, I'm from Mar del Plata (Argentina), my english is really bad and I want to be corrected by this text.
    • In my country the national sport is the football (soccer for USA), Im a big fan of Gimnasia y Esgrima La Plata, is a Club wiht a big passion for the club, and the oldest Club in America.
    • I like read and view movies, the last movie i saw was a documentary of Elliott Smith called "Heaven adores you", he was a very sensible man and a great artist, when i saw the film was impossible to compare Elliott with Kurt Cobain.
  • Thank you, Ale.

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    • In my country the national sport is the football (soccer for USA), Im a big fan of Gimnasia y Esgrima La Plata, is a Club wiht a big passion for the club, and the oldest Club in America.
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    • In my country the national sport is the football (soccer for USA),. I'm a big fan of Gimnasia y Esgrima La Plata,. It is a Cclub wihth a big passion for the club, and the oldest Club in America.
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    • I like read and view movies, the last movie i saw was a documentary of Elliott Smith called "Heaven adores you", he was a very sensible man and a great artist, when i saw the film was impossible to compare Elliott with Kurt Cobain.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • I like reading and viewwatching movies, the last movie iI saw was a documentary of Elliott Smith called "Heaven adores you", h. He was a very sensible man and a great artist, when iI saw the film I thought it was impossible to compare Elliott with Kurt Cobain.
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      赶紧投票吧！
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