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    • part of recommendation letter

  • How would you assess the preparation, feasibility, relevance and schedule of the project in question?
    • This will be for 3 assessors: Ali has a set if necessary skills, including the languages skills , as well as knowledge in the field of mechanical engineering , where he did his master in fracture mechanics , which is the same field of his Ph.D. project.
    • Ali is excellent student and he studied hard in his bachelor and master degree, so he has the great knowledge in the field of fracture mechanics to achieve his Ph.D. project.
    • Through my conversation with Ali and his suggestion to build proposal and project plan, he has great knowledge in this field and I believe that Ali he will doing great in Ph.D. project.

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    • part of recommendation letter
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • part of recommendation letterAccording to his limitless effort for his academic development, the scholarship opportunity is highly important to attain his future academic success to have deep theoretical and practical skills and knowledge. It is also worthy in building his capacity in research based activities to fill the gap in Mekelle University. Moreover, this scholarship creates him personal career transformation after he graduates from your University.
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      80% GOOD (5 votes)
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    • This will be for 3 assessors: Ali has a set if necessary skills, including the languages skills , as well as knowledge in the field of mechanical engineering , where he did his master in fracture mechanics , which is the same field of his Ph.D. project.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • This will be for 3 assessors:¶¶¶Ali has a set iof necessary skills, including the languages skills , as well asand knowledge in the field of mechanical engineering , where he did his masters in fracture mechanics , which is the same field of his Ph.D. project.
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    • Ali is excellent student and he studied hard in his bachelor and master degree, so he has the great knowledge in the field of fracture mechanics to achieve his Ph.D. project.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Ali is an excellent student and he studied hard in his bachelor and masters degree, so he has the great knowledge in the field of fracture mechanics to achievcomplete his Ph.D. project.
      SirExoticSirExotic profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • Through my conversation with Ali and his suggestion to build proposal and project plan, he has great knowledge in this field and I believe that Ali he will doing great in Ph.D. project.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Through my conversation with Ali and his suggestion to build a proposal and project plan, I think he has great knowledge in this field and I believe that Ali he will doing great inon his Ph.D. project. ¶
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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