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Сообщение от just_sevda - English

  • What is my job?

    • I have graduated from Education(Training) Faculty Depertment is Computer Education and Instructional Technologies.
    • (It is called CEIT international.) .
    • So I am computing technologies teacher.
    • I also am education designer.
  • Additionally I do web design and graphic design.
    • I love to teach and be together with children.
    • I love to show some diiferent things making by the computer to children.
    • Now we are in the "information, computing and technology age" but in Turkey, importance of our computing technologies lessons are not noticed.
    • Some persons say "Already children know computers".
    • Yes, children can use computer but only for playing game, watching videos or facebook etc. We would teach to programming and they can make themselves computer games to children.
    • Anyway, If you are read my writing and fix it, I will be so happy. Thank you.

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