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    • The college years are the best time in a person's life.

    • Learning is a great thing in life, and every induvidual has enjoyed part of his learning process.
    • Some people may argue that high school is the best time they spent in their lives, others would prefer being in college is the greatest moments in the person's life.
    • In my opinion, I believe that the best time in the individual's life is while being in college for two reasons.
    • First, you learn how to be responsible in your life.
    • Because being in college, students will be away from their parents and have to settle any of their problems down which they may face in their daily activies no matter how difficult it would be.
    • For example, 5 years ago when I started studying in the institute of health and safety engineering in Batna, it was a big challenge to me at the beggining, because I used to be more dependent on my parents.They used to cook for me, and take care of my tuition fees as well as covering my daily need.
    • However, after 2 or 3 months I got used to such a living and I got part time job which helped me to cover my needs.
    • I had to work in the library in the mean while attending my classes so often.
    • I learned how to cook and wash my cloths, it was very unique moments that I passed, and I also learned how to take responsibility over my actions as well either in any problems that I would encouter in college or even in the society.
    • As you can see, it will help you to learn how to be responsible and independant from others.
    • Second, it is more fun.
    • Because of the free times that you would have in holidays, you can pass great time hanging out with your friends and passing enjoyable moments in your life.
    • For instance, I remember when the summer holiday came, I went with my friends to another city in order to pass good time in visiting different meusimus and beaches, we swam together, and went to the malls in the evening to buy lovely stuff that was more cheaper in my city.
    • So we took advantage on our visit, and we really enjoyed the food that was served in the restaurants in that area.
    • So as you can tell, being in college will definitely enjoy the best part of your life by having lot of fun with your friends.
    • To sum it up, learning is vital for the society, and each and every individual have passed best of his time in one of the learning stages through his life.
    • Some would prefer that college is the best time that individual has in life, others would disagree with it.
    • In my humble opinion, I believe that college definitely is the best enjoyable time in an individual's life, because you will only only learn how to be responsible, but you will also have much fun while being in college.
  • I highly encourage students to take advantages while being in college.

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    • Some people may argue that high school is the best time they spent in their lives, others would prefer being in college is the greatest moments in the person's life.
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    • Some people may argue that high school is twhe best timre they spent inthe best time of their lives, others would preferargue that being in college is the greatest moments in thea person's life.
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    • Because being in college, students will be away from their parents and have to settle any of their problems down which they may face in their daily activies no matter how difficult it would be.
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    • Because beingwhen students are in college, studentsthey will be away from their parents and have to settle any of their problems down whichdeal with problems they mayight face in their daily activiesties themselves, no matter how difficult it would be.
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    • For example, 5 years ago when I started studying in the institute of health and safety engineering in Batna, it was a big challenge to me at the beggining, because I used to be more dependent on my parents.They used to cook for me, and take care of my tuition fees as well as covering my daily need.
      Vote now!
    • For example, 5 years ago when I started studying in the institute of health and safety engineering in Batna, it was a big challenge tofor me atin the beggining, because I used to be more dependent on my parents. They used to cook for me, and take care of my tuition fees as well as covering my daily needs.
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    • However, after 2 or 3 months I got used to such a living and I got part time job which helped me to cover my needs.
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    • However, after 2 or 3 months I got used to such athat way of living and I got a part time job which helped me to cover my needs.
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    • I learned how to cook and wash my cloths, it was very unique moments that I passed, and I also learned how to take responsibility over my actions as well either in any problems that I would encouter in college or even in the society.
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    • I learned how to cook and wash my clothes, it wasere very unique moments that I passed, a. And I also learned how to take responsibility fover my actions as well, either in any problems that I would encounter in college or even in the society.
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    • Because of the free times that you would have in holidays, you can pass great time hanging out with your friends and passing enjoyable moments in your life.
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    • Because of the free times that you would have in holidays, you can pass greata lot of time hanging out with your friends and passhaving enjoyable moments in your life.
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    • For instance, I remember when the summer holiday came, I went with my friends to another city in order to pass good time in visiting different meusimus and beaches, we swam together, and went to the malls in the evening to buy lovely stuff that was more cheaper in my city.
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    • For instance, I remember when the summer holiday came around, I went with my friends to another cityto another city with my friends in order to pass a good time inby visiting different meusimueums and beaches, w. We swam together, and went to the malls in the evening to buy lovely stuff that was more cheaper than in my city.
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    • So as you can tell, being in college will definitely enjoy the best part of your life by having lot of fun with your friends.
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    • So as you can tell, being in college will definitely benjoy the best part of your life byecause you will be having a lot of fun with your friends.
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    • To sum it up, learning is vital for the society, and each and every individual have passed best of his time in one of the learning stages through his life.
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    • To sum it up, learning is vital for the society, and each and every individual have passed best of hiss spent a great time in one of the learning stages through his life.
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    • In my humble opinion, I believe that college definitely is the best enjoyable time in an individual's life, because you will only only learn how to be responsible, but you will also have much fun while being in college.
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    • In my humble opinion, I believe that college definitely is the best enjoyable time in an individual's life, because you will onlynot only learn how to be responsible, but you will also have mucha lot of fun while being in college.
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