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Pesan dari FernandoH - English

    • Can you correct me please? or tell me if it hasn't sense please

    • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walking under the rain I just want to get up on the top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how can I think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
    • I was keeping away all these nights and I don’t know why.
    • I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me I have to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind ¿why should I do this?
    • ¿Why Am I feeling like I was lost on my own hometown?
  • I just wanna know!
    • But I had to wait until the sunset to catch it.

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    • Can you correct me please? or tell me if it hasn't sense please
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    • Can you correct me please? orIt’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walk under the rain. I just want to get up on top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how I can think about every minute that is passing in front of my eyes.¶I was keeping away all these nights and I don’t know why.¶I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me if it hasn't sense pleaseI have to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind. Why should I do this?¶Why Am I feeling like I was lost on my own hometown?¶I just wanna know!¶But I had to wait until the sunset to catch it.
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    • Can you correct me please? oOr tell me if it hadoesn't sense pleamake sense?
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    • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walking under the rain I just want to get up on the top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how can I think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walk ing under the rain. I just want to get up on theon top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how can I and see think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
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    • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walking underin the rain. I just want to get up on the top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see and how I can I think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
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    • I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me I have to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind ¿why should I do this?
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me I haved to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind ¿w. Why should I do this?
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      Pilih sekarang juga!
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