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    • My life

    • Hello my name is Hanane, i live in Montpellier, I am 16 soon 17 I wants learn English Somebody could help me please?
    • I'm not very strong in English at school, this years I pass my English tray if I am not improve I would never average in this way.
    • So, i couldn't to do the job estate agent business

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