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- hello there
- Im a new comer here,and i would like to learn my english,have a new friend around the world, :)

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- Im a new comer here,and i would like to learn my english,have a new friend around the world, :)
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- I'm a new ~~comer~~ here, and iI would like to ~~learn~~improve my english~~,have a~~ and make new friends around the world, :)
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- I'm a new comer here~~,and i~~. I would like to ~~learn~~practice my eEnglish~~,hav~~ and make a new friend ~~around~~in the world,. :)
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- I'm a new ~~comer here,and i~~here. I would like to learn ~~my e~~English~~,have a~~ and make new friends all around the world,. :)
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