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    • Success would come only after hard work

    • One of the best thing in life is when we live our success moments, we tend to be happy when we accomplish something even if it's a small thing, but definitely has an impact on our life.
    • It said that the reason why people suceed is because they work hard for it, and it's not a random lack.
    • In my view, hard work is the key for success for two reasons.
    • First, having a plan is a vital to succeed in life, because when we plan we know exactly what we are looking for, and what it demand from us to realise our dreams and ambitions.
    • For example, when I was in college, I used to struggle at the beginning of my first semester because I didnt attend classes so often nor did I prepare my assignments on time, and this caused me to fail in it pretty mersirablly.
    • However, in the next semester, I changed my attittude, and I knew I need to do something in order to succeed in my first year, so I had to write down my goal which was to pass my first year in college, and start writting down what are the solutions for it.
    • I started attending classes so often and ask the professors questions when I dont understand something, I spent a lot of time at the library especially in the evening reviewing my classes and finishing my assignments on time.
    • And at the end of the year, I did it and not only passed the semester but I had a high grades as well.
    • As you can see, in order to succeed you have to have a meticulous planing.
    • Second, luck will not be the key for sucess all the time, the reason is that sometimes we may get things easily and we didn't work hard for it, but it could be by chance we had the opportunity to succeed in that thing.
    • However, it is not the case in most of the thing, because in life a person has to work in order to attain something valuable.
    • For instance, when I was in high school, I had a quiz in my chemestry class, and it was a multiple answer choices.
  • So I started guessing the answer to the questions, and somehow it worked and passed the quiz.
    • Although, when my exam come after 2 weeks, I though there would be no reason for preperation because I already did well in the quiz without any efforts been done.
    • And in this time, my guessing failed me and I had only 2 points which made me fail in my class, and I had to go into a summer school in order to pass it.
    • After that I realized that only working who would help even if we somtimes tend to be lucky in some of the aspects of life.
    • But nothing would taste to succeed after a hard working.
  • As you can see, luck will not bring sucess even if we sometimes succeed in some of the random things.
  • In sum, success in life is an important key factor to have a reason to stay alive, and to realise your dreams after it.
  • Some may think that luck would bring sucess, and others believe that only hard work is the solution for sucess.
  • For me, I prefer to work hard in order to attain sucess in life because having a plan is vital to suceed, also luck will not be the key for sucess most of the time.
  • And I would encourage people to work hard in their life in order to succeed in their lives to realise their dreams.

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    • One of the best thing in life is when we live our success moments, we tend to be happy when we accomplish something even if it's a small thing, but definitely has an impact on our life.
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    • One of the best things in life is when we live our successful moments, w. We tend to be happy when we accomplish something, even if it's a small thing, bu. It definitely has an impact on our life.
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    • First, having a plan is a vital to succeed in life, because when we plan we know exactly what we are looking for, and what it demand from us to realise our dreams and ambitions.
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    • First, having a plan is a vital to succeed in life, because when we plan we know exactly what we are looking for, and what its demanded from us to realisze our dreams and ambitions.
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    • For example, when I was in college, I used to struggle at the beginning of my first semester because I didnt attend classes so often nor did I prepare my assignments on time, and this caused me to fail in it pretty mersirablly.
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    • For example, when I was in college, I used to struggle at the beginning of my first semester because I didn't attend classes so often, nor did I prepare my assignments on time, and this caused me to fail in it pretty mersiiserablly.
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  • Sentence 6
    • However, in the next semester, I changed my attittude, and I knew I need to do something in order to succeed in my first year, so I had to write down my goal which was to pass my first year in college, and start writting down what are the solutions for it.
      Vote now!
    • However, in the next semester, I changed my attittude, and I knew I needed to do something in order to succeed in my first year, s. So I had to write down my goal, which was to pass my first year in college, and start writting down what are the solutions for it.
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  • Sentence 7
    • I started attending classes so often and ask the professors questions when I dont understand something, I spent a lot of time at the library especially in the evening reviewing my classes and finishing my assignments on time.
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    • I started attending classes somore often and asked the professors questions when I donidn't understand something,. I spent a lot of time at the library, especially in the evening, reviewing my classes and finishing my assignments on time.
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    • Second, luck will not be the key for sucess all the time, the reason is that sometimes we may get things easily and we didn't work hard for it, but it could be by chance we had the opportunity to succeed in that thing.
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    • Secondly, luck will not be the key for sucess all the time, the reason is that sometimes we may get things easily and we didn't work hard for it, but it could be by chance we had the opportunity to succeed in that thing.
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    • However, it is not the case in most of the thing, because in life a person has to work in order to attain something valuable.
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    • However, it is not the case in most of the thingime, because in life a person has to work in order to attain something valuable.
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    • Although, when my exam come after 2 weeks, I though there would be no reason for preperation because I already did well in the quiz without any efforts been done.
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    • Although, when my exam coame after 2 weeks, I thought there would be no reason for preperation because I already did well in the quiz without any efforts having been done.
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    • And in this time, my guessing failed me and I had only 2 points which made me fail in my class, and I had to go into a summer school in order to pass it.
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    • And in this time, my guessing failed me and I had only 2 points which made me fail in my class, and I had to go into a summer school in order to pass it.
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    • After that I realized that only working who would help even if we somtimes tend to be lucky in some of the aspects of life.
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    • After that I realized that only working whofor something would help even if we somtimes tend to be lucky in some of the aspects of life.
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    • For me, I prefer to work hard in order to attain sucess in life because having a plan is vital to suceed, also luck will not be the key for sucess most of the time.
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