корекции

Text from Anais16 - English

Travel
Hello, my name is Anaïs and I'm 16 years old.
- On september I will go to London, so If you know London, do you advise me to go a place??

Заглавие
- Travel
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Заглавие
Sentence 1
- Hello, my name is Anaïs and I'm 16 years old.
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- On september I will go to London, so If you know London, do you advise me to go a place??
  Vote now!
- OIn september I wi'll go to London, so Iif you know London, do you ~~advise me to go a place?~~have some advise for me about where to go?
  HeartForLanguage Коментари
  
  Сигнализирай за спам?
  
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2