Correccións

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Corrixido

Text from Othis - English

versión orixinal
Corrected Version

- Introduce myself
- hello everybody, My name Othmane!
- I live in Morocco in Rabat and I work at biggest company of aeronautical industrie.
- I have 28 years ago.
- I hope to be fluent in english because I need that for my work and my bisuness matter.
- I want perfected my comprehension and my written and learn the different idioms.
- If you have a method to make that, you see me so happy.
- Thank you very much.

OthisNovember 2012Vote now!
- Report as spam?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Título
- Introduce myself
  Vote now!
- Introduce myself ¶¶(Better have your code name or something to make it catchy.)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- Introduc~~e m~~ing Myself
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Título
Frase 1
- hello everybody, My name Othmane!
  Vote now!
- hHello everybody,¶¶Mmy name is Othmane!
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (3 votes)
- hello everybody,¶¶My name Othmane!¶¶(Hello everybody, My name is Othmane!)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- hHello everybody,!¶¶My name is Othmane!.
  reddeck Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- hello everybody, ¶¶My name is Othmane!
  gek86 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- hello everybody,¶¶My name Othmane! My name is Othmane
  FatimahNur Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- hello everybody,¶
  ¶
  My name is Othmane!.
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 1
Frase 2
- I live in Morocco in Rabat and I work at biggest company of aeronautical industrie.
  Vote now!
- I live in Morocco in Rabat and I work ~~at biggest company of~~in the aeronautical industriey biggest company.
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  0% GOOD (1 votes)
- I live in Morocco in Rabat and I work at biggest company of aeronautical industrie.¶¶(I live in Rabat, Morocco and I have worked at the biggest company of aeronautics industry.)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I live in Morocco in ~~Rabat and I work at biggest company of aeronautical industrie~~the city of Rabat.I work as an engineer in the biggest aeronautical company in Morocco.
  mba_123 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I live in Morocco in Rabat and I work at the biggest company ofin the aeronautical industriey.
  JamesM Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I live in Morocco, in the city of Rabat. ~~and~~ I work ~~at big~~for the largest company ofin the aeronautical industriey.
  lynestka Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I live in Morocco in Rabat, and I work at the biggest company of aeronautical industrie.s
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 2
Frase 3
- I have 28 years ago.
  Vote now!
- I ~~have 28 years ago~~am 28.
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I have 28 years ago.¶¶(I don't know what you want to imply with this. Maybe you mean "I have worked there 28 years ago." ???
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  50% GOOD (2 votes)
- I ~~have 28 years ago~~'m 28.
  mba_123 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I have 28 years ~~ago.~~old.¶J'ai 28 ans
  JamesM Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  0% GOOD (2 votes)
- I ~~have~~was born 28 years ago.
  lynestka Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I ~~have~~am 28 years ~~ago~~old.
  hokietide Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I have 28 years ago. i'm 28 years ago
  FatimahNur Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I ~~have~~'m 28 years ago.
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 3
Frase 4
- I hope to be fluent in english because I need that for my work and my bisuness matter.
  Vote now!
- I hope to be fluent in eEnglish because I need ~~tha~~it for my work and my b~~isu~~usiness matters.
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I hope to be fluent in english because I need that for my work and my bisuness matter.¶¶(instead of hope why not make it "want" to sound more business term, for instance, ¶I want to be fluent in English because I need it for my work and my business.)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I hope to be ~~fluent in english because I need that for my work and my bisuness matter~~able to speak English fluently because I need to speak English in order to communicate with international companies.
  mba_123 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I hope to become fluent in eEnglish because I need that for my work and my b~~isu~~usiness ~~matter~~.
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 4
Frase 5
- I want perfected my comprehension and my written and learn the different idioms.
  Vote now!
- I want ~~per~~to prefected my comprehension ~~and~~, my writ~~ten~~ing and learn ~~the~~ different idioms.
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I want perfected my comprehension and my written and learn the different idioms.¶¶(I want to perfect my writing and learn different idioms for better comprehension.)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I want ~~perfected my comprehension and my written and learn the different~~to understand spoken English as well as written English.Given that I need to learn variety of idioms.
  mba_123 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- I w~~ant~~ould like to perfected both my comprehension ands well as my written skills, and learn the different idioms.
  lynestka Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- I want to perfected my comprehension and my writtening and learn ~~the~~ different idioms.
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 5
Frase 6
- If you have a method to make that, you see me so happy.
  Vote now!
- If you have a method to ~~mak~~achieve that, ~~you see m~~I will be so happy.
  vincent Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- If you have a method to make that, you see me so happy.¶¶(If you have a way to help then I'll be happy that you will help me.)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- If you have a ~~method to make that, you see me so happy~~ny useful methods in your mind, I would be happy to know them.
  mba_123 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- If you have a method to make that~~, you se~~ happen, then you will make me sovery happy.
  JamesM Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- If you have a ~~method to make~~way to do thatis, you sewould make me so happy.!
  lynestka Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- If you have a method ~~to make that~~for helping me, you semake me so happy.
  Samaneh4 Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 6
Frase 7
- Thank you very much.
  Vote now!
- Thank you very much.¶¶(good!)
  Rosequeen28 Comentarios 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- Thank you very much.thank you soo much
  FatimahNur Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- Thank you very much.thank you soo much
  FatimahNur Comentarios
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 7

Correccións

Text from Othis - English

Introduce myself

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Membros

Idiomas

Eventos