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  • Hello, I retired a few months and I want improve my English with people who have similar interests points to mine.
  • I love traveling, crafts, physical activities (walking, running, cycling ...) In September, my wife and I will be an annual trip of several weeks in Australia (Brisbane) to visit our daughter who lives there with her husband and three children for about ten years. Thanks

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    • Hello, I retired a few months and I want improve my English with people who have similar interests points to mine.
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    • I love traveling, crafts, physical activities (walking, running, cycling ...) In September, my wife and I will be an annual trip of several weeks in Australia (Brisbane) to visit our daughter who lives there with her husband and three children for about ten years. Thanks
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