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- Yesterday norming my wisdom tooth hurt me so badly because one growing.
- So I just slept all the day and woke up at 5 p.m. went to my friend and convince her to go to town for dinner (I am in Fidji actually)

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- Yesterday norming my wisdom tooth hurt me so badly because one growing.
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- Yesterday nmormning one of my wisdom tooeeth was hurt meing so badly because ~~one~~it's growing.
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- So I just slept all the day and woke up at 5 p.m. went to my friend and convince her to go to town for dinner (I am in Fidji actually)
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- ~~So I just~~I slept all ~~the day and~~day long, woke up at 5 ~~p.m.~~PM, and then went to my friend and convinced her to go to town for dinner. (I am currently in Fidji ~~actually)~~.
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